Friday, August 28, 2009

55 Fiction : First valentine...

55 Fiction is a form of micro-fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.

First valentine.....

He called her to the valentine night .She was on cloud nine , she dreamt of this moment .
She was happy and blushing all the through the day. At the last moment got some work , but still managed somehow to be free. She called him just to listen .. dear so sorry that was just a joke….


  1. Awww.... poor girlie ...a bad joke I say... but the story was nice one !!!

  2. A very bad one (the joke, I mean!)...I must say!! :(

  3. That must have been the worst valentine for the girl.....nice 55 again.....


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