Wednesday, September 02, 2009

55 word fiction.

55 Fiction is a form of micro-fiction that refers to the works of fiction limited to a maximum of fifty-five words.



The not so obvious truth...


Papa see the train is moving ,the trees are moving behind and so are the clouds, oh its raining now, to this the embarrassed couple sitting in the opposite seat asked why don’t you show this 25 year old man to a good doctor.
The old man replied my son got his eyes today only.












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6 comments:

  1. Wow! That was very nice...very well written!

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  2. yeah read a similar theme few back..but u converted in 55f in a good manner :)

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  3. Nicely written..touchy !

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  4. A nice fiction. The end is good!

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  5. wow.... a very nice 55..Lots of people are so fascinated about this 55 thing... I always tried to write a 55... but every time its a flop..But you girls are great in 55... I know another girl shruthi who writes 55 very well.... And thanks a lot for commenting in my blog.... keep visiting often...thanks a lot..

    And the end was really good in this 55...

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  6. Hey..this is a 1st time visit.

    I like your blog template a lot. Very cool.

    Touching post. Nice take on perspective!

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